The Kai's Revised Premiere: ................................B

B'Etor
VIP
Plotted with Lursa to seize power from Gowron with the support of the Romulans. Younger of the two Duras sisters. The pretty one.
Treachery Leadership Physics Youth Greed
Integrity 2 Cunning 8 Strength 7

Changes: Not much; a bonus for being with her sister, and a special downlaod that seems appropriate. (Lursa will have complimentay abilities).

Final version:
B'Etor
VIP
Younger of the sisters of Duras. Plotted with her sister Lursa to overthrow Gowron, with the aid of the Romulans. The pretty one.
Treachery Leadership Physics Youth Greed V: Klingon Civil War
Attributes +2 if with Lursa.
Integrity 2 Cunning 8 Strength 7

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Changes: There are two other Klingon Navigation specialists, both of them better. I gave him a special ability to reflect his posting in the diplomatic delegation, and gave him Music, a skill which Klingons are very short on.

Final version:
.B'iJik
OFFICER
Male officer in the Klingon Defense Force. Served as a junior adjutant to Gowron's diplomatic delegation. Enjoys Klingon opera.
Navigation Music May report to where your  Diplomacy is present.
Integrity 5 Cunning 6 Strength 7

Changes: The reprting ability makes her a little stronger in a Colony strategy (especially a Gi'ral/Tokath based one). Nothing else major.

Final version:
Ba'el
CIVILIAN
½ Klingon, ½ Romulan female born in Tokath's prison camp/colony for survivors of the Khitomer Massacre. Daughter of Gi'ral and Tokath. Romantically involved with Worf.
Anthropology Youth May report to your Colony (free if Tokath or Gi'ral present)
Integrity 6 Cunning 6 Strength 4

No changes: No problems with the current version, and no special abilities that he's crying out for. He's good.

Final version: No change

Changes: This is such a sacred cow that I'm not touching it. I'll just tighten the wording and fix the awkward lore. DNA Related is a new key phrase to easily identify dilemmas that do not affect androids, holograms or exocomps.

Final version:
Barclay's Protomorphosis Disease
Space/Planet Dilemma
Contagious affliction named for Lieutenant Reginald Barclay. Triggers dormant DNA fragments, causing victims to de-evolve into primitive forms.
Entire crew or Away Team dies unless MEDICAL, SCIENCE and SECURITY present. Discard dilemma. (DNA Related) [10]

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Changes: Boooor-ing! Korris does exactly the same thing, and there are plenty of Klingon Honor specialists. Shouldn't an outpost commander have, oh, maybe... Leadership?!?! I also spiced up the lore a little bit, made him unique and gave a complementary special ability.

Final version:
Batrell
OFFICER
Representative member of the Klingon Defense Force. Former commander of the Narenda III outpost. Said to be able to outdrink anyone in the Empire.
Leadership Honor Nullifies Blended where present, scoring points. [5]
Integrity 7 Cunning 3 Strength 7

Changes: Ugh... truly awful lore, Integrity that defies rational explanation, and no worthwhile skills. Gave him a special ability which reflects his actions in the show and a few other tweaks. Expect the Pheonix to have excellent synergy with it's captain when it arrives.

Final version:
Benjamin Maxwell
OFFICER
Captain of the USS Pheonix. Miles O'Brien's former commanding officer. In 2367, launched a series of unprovoked attacks against the Cardassians, believing them to be developing weapons.
May initiate battle against  affiliation.
Leadership Honor Treachery
Integrity 6 Cunning 7 Strength 5

No changes: It's powerful, but with so much downloading in the game, not overly so. Just like a good artifact should be.

Final version: No change

Changes: Not much.  Added a special download which is in flavor and keeps her from being completely worthless compared to her FC version.

Final version:
Beverly Crusher
MEDICAL
Dr. Beverly Crusher is the chief medical officer of the USS Enterprise.  Dancer and thespian.  Widow of Jack Crusher.  Mother of Ensign Wesley Crusher.
MEDICAL Biology Exobiology V: Hypospray
Integrity 8 Cunning 8 Strength 5

Changes: Nothing functional, but I tightened up the wording (which needed it badly)

Final version:
Birth of "Junior"
Space Dilemma
Large spaceborne lifeform.  Attatched itself to the USS Enterprise, which it mistook for its mother.  Endangered the ship by draining power from its systems.
Place on ship.  Range reduced by 1 each turn.  When Range=0, ship destroyed.  Cure with 3 ENGINEER aboard.

Changes: I added an extra skill to make him more useful, and altered his lore a bit.  Nothing earthshaking, I'm afraid.

Final version:
Bochra
OFFICER
Navigation officer aboard a Romulan scout vessel which crashed on Galondron Core.  Forced to work with Geordi LaForge in order to survive.
Navigation Youth Stellar Cartography
Integrity 7 Cunning 7 Strength 6

Changes: I added Biology for the DNA trick he pulled with Jason Vigo.  I also made him Ferengi affiliation.  Even though his title of DaiMon was revoked, he was still part of Ferengi society.

Final version:
Bok
OFFICER
Former DaiMon whose son was killed by Jean-Luc Picard during the Battle of Maxia.  Seeks revenge, even at the expense of his profits.
Greed ENGINEER Treachery Computer Skill Biology
Integrity 4 Cunning 9 Strength 4

Changes: Nothing functional, but I tightened up the wording a lot, and clarified the lore.

Final version:
Borg Ship
Space Dilemma
Borg cubes posess powerful weapons and remarkable regenerative shields.  If disconnected from the Collective, they may begin attacking everything in their vicinity.
Start here.  Attacks everything like a ship with WEAPONS and SHIELDS of 24.  At end of every turn, moves one card toward and off long end of spaceline.  Score points if destroyed in battle. [45]

No changes: Simple, but effective.  Nothing wrong here.

Final version: No change