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. Calloway
MEDICAL
Ensign Calloway is representative of Starfleet medical technicians.  Served aboard the USS Enterprise in 2370.
Youth
Integrity 7 Cunning 5 Strength 3

Changes: Gee, how useless can you get?  I made her generally useful, and altered the lore and gametext to reflect her role in "Eye of the Beholder".

Final version:
. Calloway
MEDICAL
Ensign Maddy Calloway is representative of Starfleet medical technicians.  Serving aboard the USS Enterprise in 2370, when her boyfriend Dan Kwan comitted suicide.
Youth May nullify Paralell Romance if present oYour MEDICAL-related equipment may play free here.
Integrity 7 Cunning 6 Strength 3

Changes: As is, the only way to get by is by fighting the Chalnoth. What about negotiating a more peaceful way past? The episode ("Allegience") certainly suggests this route. Nothing much else, though. Oh, yeah, I also made it a wall. (The Chalnoth sticks around until you kill him or negotiate past).

Final version:
Chalnoth
Planet Dilemma
Member of an anarchistic lupine race of humanoids. Have a reputation for reacting violently to many situations. Negotiations with such creatures are difficult, though possible.
Kills one Away Team member (opponent's choice) unless 3 SECURITY OR 3 Diplomacy OR Strength >40 present. [5]

. Christopher Hobson

Changes: Like most of the generic mission specialists, I've given him another regular skill and a minor special one designed to make the Sutherland more playable. Don't worry, I'll be sure to leave a Comp Skill mission specialist for Empok Nor.

Final version:
. Christopher Hobson
OFFICER
Lieutenant Commander aboard the USS Sutherland when Data commanded it during the Klingon Civil War in 2368. Representative of staff officers serving in Starfleet.
Navigation Computer Skill
If on USS Sutherland, it is WEAPONS and SHILEDS +1 (+2 if Klingon Civil War in play).
Integrity 6 Cunning 7 Strength 6

Changes: The name and lore suggest that this should be a space mission. Since I need to have a Romulan homeworld, though, I'm altering the "concept" of the mission a bit. I'm also changing the requirements, since the current ones make little sense. Finally, I upped the points, since a 30-point homeworld is just embarrasing :-).

Final version:
Cloaked Mission
Planet Mission (Homeworld)
Romulus: Aid operatives working in deep cover on the Romulan homeworld.
Computer Skill + Honor + Leadership + (Klingon Intelligence OR 2 SECURITY + Treachery)
Klg {3} [35]

.Combat Vessel

Changes: Gave it a download that reflects the fact that it destroyed itself rather than be captured.  Tweaked the lore a bit, too.

Final version:
.Combat Vessel
Unknown Class
Attack craft popular with mercenaries.  One attacked the USS Enterprise in 2368 at the surplus depot at Qualor II.  Equipped with a self-destruct mechanism.
V: Auto-Destruct Sequence
Range 8 Weapons 8 Shields 6

Changes: Right now, it's practically a guaranteed 5 points.  I made it a little tougher, and allowed to take out a Black Hole.

Final version:
Cosmic String Fragment
Space Dilemma
Massive spatial anomaly as thin as a proton, but with the gravitational pull of a black hole.
Unless ENGINEER + 2 Physics OR SCIENCE + Astrophysics aboard, place on this location.  Now and end of each turn, any undocked ship without Navigation x2 here is 'pulled in' (destroyed).  If pulled in by a Black Hole, destroy both. [5]

Changes: I added a way for the Tal Shiar to help out and made the Neutral Zone clearer.

Final version:
Covert Installation
Planet Mission
Neutral Zone Region, Devora: Build hidden monitoring station on this planet.
ENGINEER x2 + SECURITY + (Leadership x2 + Treachery OR Tal Shiar)
[Rom] [3] [35]

Changes: Gave Tomalak his own way to do the mission, and allowed both "honorable" and "dishonorable" ways to attempt.

Final version:
Covert Rescue
Planet Mission
Galorndon Core: Retrieve crashed scoutship in Federation territory.
(Leadership x2 + SECURITY OR Tomalak) + (Diplomacy + Honor + INTEGRITY >30 OR Treachery + Navigation + CUNNING >30)
[Rom] [4] [35]

Changes: Weakened his ability quite a bit, but also allowed him to make a "tactical retreat".  I'll address the Rogue Borg themselves when I get there.

Final version:
Crosis
Interrupt
Fanatical Borg lieutenant of Lore.  Captured Lt. Commander Data with the lure of emotions.
Plays on your group of Rogue Borg.  Doubles their STRENGTH this turn OR up to four of them "retreat" to owner's hand (remainder are discarded).

Changes: Altered the bizarrely-phrased lore, and changed the requirements.  Tried to make it strong normally, but not overpowered with Lore in play.

Final version:
Crystalline Entity
Space/Planet Dilemma
Spaceborne entity which strips biological energy from planets and ships.  Its crystalline structure resonates to a modulated graviton beam.
Space: Kills all life on ship unless SHIELDS >6 OR SCIENCE + (Exobiology OR Music) aboard.  Discard dilemma.
Planet: Kills all life on planet unless MEDICAL + Physics OR SCIENCE + Geology present.  Discard dilemma.

Changes: Wouldn't Exobiology make more sense than Leadership for this?  I also changed the attribute to Integrity (to resist exploiting the natives)

Final version:
Cultural Observation
Planet Mission
Mintaka III: Aid observation of pre-industrial society here.
Anthropology + Exobiology + SECURITY + INTEGRITY >30
[Fed] [4] [40]

No changes: No big problems with this one.

Final version: No change